which do you like best

elizabeths

The running man ran past a white shoe hanging from a trees branch.
He was surrounded by bamboo.He ran on to a beach the waves were jules.

OR

Yazzmins

the terrified man, who was running and passed a muckish white shoe

hanging from a long, tall and thin tree branch. He was surrounded by

bamboo and then he noticed some light. Then he ran onto a

lovely, golden beach, the waves were like sparkaling diamonds.

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